Temeraire: Crucible of Gold, Part 2

In the second part of Crucible of Gold, things get hairy as Laurence and company are forcibly marooned and have to figure out how to save themselves. Then things get hairier when Iskerkia is left unsupervised…

This review is brought to you by a lot of God Damn It Iskerkia.



Last week I got to welcome the return of this series’ winning formula, after the mostly inexplicable dip it took with Tongues of Serpents. This week, things are escalating quickly – perhaps more quickly than ever? Given that we have about two and a half books left in the series, that makes a kind of sense. It’s laid a lot of groundwork, and now it’s got less page time to resolve it all in. All hands on deck!

After being somewhat callously dumped on a tiny island by their French ‘rescuers’ in order to prevent strategic information about their comings and goings being handed to British agents, Will and company have to figure out a way to get themselves to safety and back on course to carry out their own mission before that ship returns for them. And, to complicate matters, they have to first survive an attempt by mutinous ex-convicts suffering alcohol withdrawal to ‘overthrow’ them. It all gets a bit Lord of the Flies, and the sheer intensity of the ugly attack on Team Laurence – in which even Emily Roland, bless her fearless heart, takes a beating and Demane is almost thrown on a fire only to be saved by a furious Kulingile – was impressive enough that I had to take a break from reading and make myself a cup of tea to recover.

But despite this harrowing pit stop, the story is soon back on track, and in glorious fashion – this time around we’re visiting the land of the Incas and getting a wonderful faceful of their culture, and it is not at all what anybody expected. Once again, Will’s (relatively mild) prejudices get a bit of an airing, though interestingly (thankfully) he is, at this point, having far less trouble taking the perspectives and beliefs of others in stride.

Good thing too, because they might be in a far more interesting predicament than ever, but that predicament is still pretty real. Thanks to Iskerkia’s infuriating lack of patience, forethought and subtlety, it doesn’t take long before a potential diplomatic incident is caused. Short version: lacking any maps of the area, she essentially kidnaps a solitary old man, sparing absolutely no thought for whether or not this was right, wise or even bloody polite. It all makes sense in Iskerkia’s mind, though, so hang everything else. *Sigh*

Of course this treads on some legal toes as well as upon the toes of propriety – Iskerkia has in fact committed a theft, given that the old man ‘belongs’ to someone else. Despite his natural inclination to disagree on the moral aspects of the matter (whether or not the old man has the right to say what ought to be done with him), Laurence must and eventually does bow to the Incan laws and customs, and Iskerkia finds herself having to face one of the local dragons in a duel.


Oh, and in an absolutely delightful inversion of ‘norms’ and of everybody’s expectations, the Governor that they have to work this whole incident out with is a dragon. A DRAGON.

(I need Governor Hualpa fan art and I need it now.)

While Will is gobsmacked over having to deal in such a way with dragons directly for once, I am personally gobsmacked over how absolutely amazing and overdue this development is. They’ve landed in a place where DRAGONS GOVERN THEMSELVES oh, and they technically own humans and not the other way around. There are some intricate cultural technicalities that take a lot of the distasteful slavery connotations that we’re used to out of the equation; owned humans are not treated as slaves but rather as family members, of a sort. The old man whom Iskerkia snatched was nonetheless not free to decide where he ought to be, so there’s no question of simply releasing him or of taking him somewhere else he’d like to be. They’ve inadvertently made a claim to him in the eyes of the local law, and since Iskerkia is the one who committed the theft, she’s the one who must answer for it.

Iskerkia must learn a lesson … by getting into a fight.

Yeah, only one of those things is actually going to happen, isn’t it.

Guys, I am just about completely done with Iskerkia. Her temperament and her attitude were a source of delightful amusement when she was fresh out of the shell and still a dragonet with everything to learn, but enough time has passed that her stubborn refusal to ever admit she’s wrong, or to learn that fighting and hoarding are not the most important things in life, are really starting to grate on my nerves. I’m down to my last one by the time she has to face the consequences of her rash actions here, and when she starts to show off during a duel that might well decide the fate of everybody else in her company? Yeah. I am done. By this point I hope something does happen to finally drive the point home that she needs to start checking herself, but it’s just too likely to be driven home by way of bad things happening to somebody else and I am not here for that.

I am, however, absolutely here for Will Laurence taking the lessons that this particular draconian culture has to teach him and letting them sink in, taking them with him wherever he ends up going next and just maybe, finally making good on some of the early promise of this series, with regards to dragon emancipation. By now he has little to no excuse for not knowing damned well that the way the British government treats their dragons is inexcusable, and now he has ample evidence that legally freeing them will not mean the end of the world.

I’m not sure I would advocate letting all dragons everywhere claim power over people, though. One look at Lien is enough proof that dragonkind is as flawed as humanity in many ways. But their time spent among the Inca dragons is bound to be a big, brightly coloured eye-opener, right? There are other ways of doing things that might benefit EVERYONE.

But first they’ve got to finally end this pesky war with Napoleon, so whatever happens next here, I doubt they’ll be staying put for long. But with more seeds of this moral lesson planted, I’ve got fresh hope for bigger changes coming.

If Iskerkia will just stop fucking everything up and start acting like the grown dragon she is.

4 thoughts on “Temeraire: Crucible of Gold, Part 2

  1. All this. I mean, I DO like that the dragons have such a range of personalities – Temmy is clever but naive, Lien is clever, elegant and ruthless, Maximus and Lily are adorable, Perscitia is clever, arrogant and cowardly, Caesar is a lazy, self-absorbed snot, and Iskierka is arrogant, thoughtless and self-absorbed. There’s no template, and it’s not related to their breed. It’s never laboured, it’s just beautifully illustrated: nowt so queer or varied, or wonderful, or annoying as folk.

    But ye gods I wish Iskierka would learn to reflect on her actions. NOTHING seems to get through to her. I too am tired of it. It’s a useful plot device sometimes, but… grrrrrr. I was actually hoping she’d develop a reciprocal crush on the Inca dragon – I’m not big on the Tame Them With Love trope, but in her case I’ll take almost anything 😉

    Tell you what I really want to know though – WHAT HAS MRS PEMBERTON BEEN UP TO? Gadding about with elegant Parisian ladies from the salons in a strange country. This can go in a couple of ways, obviously: she can be reduced to being their companion / servant, kept in her place on charity (which will frustrate me enormously) or she can have swept into Inca society and made waves and earned her own place and be well placed for shenanigans when we finally rejoin her.

    I know which I’d rather see. GO MRS PEMBERTON. GO GO GO. On the basis of very little evidence, in my mind she is brave and ferocious and good at taking most things in her stride. TAKE THEM MRS PEMBERTON. TAKE THEM. Ahem.


      I dream that she has been/will be welcomed into the Incan fold and will turn up, fierce as you say, to give Iskerkia what-for.

      I just feel that, with Jane pushed into the background now, we’re down to Iskerkia and Emily Roland as our female representation, and while I love Emily, she’s not enough in that regard. I love this series but I’ve definitely felt the lack of female presence. Naturally I’m latching on pretty hard to Mrs Pemberton. Also, if nothing else is done with her at all I’ll be very let down, because otherwise why introduce her?

      So, I cling to hope!

      1. I wonder if that’s why we’re both so annoyed with Iskierka too? I had a bit of a Kaab moment with her, where I flipped the lens and wondered how I’d respond to her actions if she were a male dragon. I still wouldn’t like or approve of her, but – as I realised with Kaab – I think I’d be less disappointed in her (like I don’t LIKE Caesar, but I don’t expect better of him / hope he’ll reform. I’m happy to just Not Like him. At all). Bad Anna. Still with the double standards.

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